SLOW DOWN OR PAUSE
Slow down or pause when you feel stressed,
When you think you have very little time,
When you burning a midnight oil,
When you are working on the eleventh-hour,
When you reckon there's no tomorrow for you,
When you almost losing your patience,
Losing your mind,
Losing all the things you own,
Losing everything you love,
Desperately searching for answers or solutions,
BECAUSE....
By slowing down or pausing,
You would save more time,
You would save your sanity,
You would save everything,
SO...
Just try and see,
What happens if you just,
SLOW DOWN OR PAUSE.
This is just a-spur-of-the-moment poem for everybody. I love to write poems and this has been my passion since I was in primary school. (though I started reading or reciting poems in my first language-Bahasa Melayu). I hope everybody can enjoy and read between the lines.
20 comments:
wah..poem cipta sendiri..sedap la kak nur,*clap clap clap*.. poem pembakar semangat nih...saya suggest kak nur bukukan poems kak nur=)
Yani, this is good. I like this. I wish I have the same skills boleh write poem etc...susah for me. Tak pandai...tulis merapu boleh la :) Btw, I push my pause button yesterday Friday and stop blogging or glued in front of pc just to spend quality time with the girls & tengok cartoon with them:))
kak nur minat puisi2 ye? :)
wah..K.nur ada bakat berpuitis ye..boleh tahan :)good job!
Fadilah, belum sampai tahap nak bukukan kot sbb tak delah banyak sgt yg dicipta sendiri.
Ica, that was a good pause button. I reckon ur girls loved it.
Nadiah, mmg minat dr dulu2 lg.
Thanks Mila.
Nura, how appropriate that I read your blog for the first time and here is a poem written just for me it seems! Thank you for the reminder, I often miss so much when I am rushing about. I am glad you are writing a blog, we will be able to keep in touch after you leave.
woo...pandainya!nurul kagum tul org pandai wat poem ni.....kak nur balik malaysia,jadi la penulis puisi kat newspaper:-)
I'm glad that u want to come and read my blog! Sure we can keep in touch through blog and FB.
Nurul, insya Allah. banyak projek ni bila balik Msia. nak kena cari masa je nak buat.
suka suka suka..
inspiration injected...
hmm..puisi yg membina.:).betul kan kak..bile masa rasa stres dgn mcm2 mende nak urus dlm kehidupan ni,sesekali tu kena juga tangguh sekejap untuk cari ketenangan dulu.lepas tu,minda dh tenang, kerja pun bley buat dgn lebih elok..:)
Saya pun suka Kyong suka puisi ni. :D
Diyana, buat kerja pun lg tenang kan.
poem ur karang sendiri?kreatif...
sangat betul,..kekadang kena bertenang dulu kan..
kalu gitu life keno ado remt control mace dale cerito CLICK → baru leh slow down or pause hehehehheehe
Eyriqazz, yup I like to write a poem.
Nia, yup that's right.
Ti, tapi kalu ado remote control pun, buke boleh control jugok sbb tengok last2 tunggang terbalik dunia dio.
Nur mmg best poem atas ni.. cayalah..
awat tak deklamasi sajak malam puisi nanti? mesti best..
Nani, takpela dah ramai yg deklamasi puisi kan. nak pergi tengok je nanti.
I love this one!
Kak Nura, i pun pernah ada impromptu mood to berpuisi in English :P I have made a poem with the name of my son before...the words just flows in my mind once I set on his name...it's amazing kan! How the words just flows in amazingly!
Cheers!
salam,
actually this is my very first visit to this blog...
nice poem... and nice info too
Molly, it's true sometimes u just write what u can think of.
Yg baik, thanks for visiting.
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