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Monday, January 24, 2011

Don't play, play?- The more suitable sentences(Use English Correctly Series)

Salam,

At 6 p.m., I shared some sentences that I came across from my daughters' sand art plastic wrap. The sentences were the instructions on how to do the sand art.

Here were the sentences:
MAKING METHOD:
1- PICK UP THE PART WHEN YOU WANT TO PAINTING.
2- SPRINKLING COLOR SAND ON THE PART.
3- SPRINKLING DEEP COLOR SAND FIRST, THEN THE SHALLOW COLOR SAND.


And here are the more suitable sentences:
Making method:
1- Tear up the part when you want to paint.
2- Sprinkle the specific color sand on the specific part.
3- Sprinkle the dark color sand first, then the light color sand.

Note:
Pick up- only suitable to use to lift up, improve, find, call for socially or arrest for crime.
Deep color? & Shallow color? - Deep and shallow are definitely not for colors but more for depth of water. 


Thanks to Yan and Idayu who tried to give me the correct sentences. Maybe next time we'll try with other sentences or you can even provide the sentences that you have come across somewhere.

4 comments:

Sitisifir10 said...

:) kalau baca instructions benda2 yang MAde In China akan jumpalah benda2 mcm ni...kadang tu rasa lawak baca tapi saya punya English pun suam2 kuku je :)

Idayu said...

he3...thank you teacher!

mila.ibunajihah said...

i like this post :) thanks

transformed housewife said...

you're welcome Mila.